Overall I thought your presentation was convincing and well organized. By bringing the actual iPod as a visual aid made us easier to understand the way sound is transmitted through speakers. Also, it was good that you make strong intonations on important words like "however", which made us audience easier to understand the structure of your speech. As a suggestion, the speech seemed a bit short so you could have added more appeals about how live performances are better compared to music from the media. Or maybe more about your favorite band! ;)
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ReplyDeleteOverall I thought your presentation was convincing and well organized.
By bringing the actual iPod as a visual aid made us easier to understand the way sound is transmitted through speakers.
Also, it was good that you make strong intonations on important words like "however", which made us audience easier to understand the structure of your speech.
As a suggestion, the speech seemed a bit short so you could have added more appeals about how live performances are better compared to music from the media. Or maybe more about your favorite band! ;)